All Comments on 'Beach House Vacation Ch. 02'

"For the second time on this trip, Michelle had sneaked into my room and was slipping herself into bed with me." I loved this line...because your next part of this story is well written, creates arousal and leaves nothing out for your imagination to think about as they enjoy each other.

Please continue the story....I wonder how Lori respond to all this?

Great story, It was passionate and very hot. Keep it going you are doing a great job!

I'd sure like to read more of this oddessy as it's well written and has a good plot.