All Comments on 'Beach House Vacation Ch. 03'

by Angel497

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
We need to talk...

What will Michelle and Tom talk about - how they sneak off together away from Lori or get her involved too in their love making...

Well written...looking forward to your next story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great!

More please? ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
continue?

please continue this story! as well as your others, they all seem to just drop off. i loved all of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Amazing!

Finish this amazing story!

MineriiMineriiover 9 years ago
Good

Seems like there needs to be more are you still working on it?

falcon69wlfalcon69wlabout 5 years ago
The story needs a finish

You left the story up in the air.... It needs at least another chapter maybe 2 or more....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Finish it! It’s amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Stop saying, "the pretty ladies".

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