All Comments on 'Beach in Heat'

Sorry, just not into the idea of tasting someone's shit, let alone their own shit. Different strokes.... I tried to continue reading, but that image wouldn't leave my head. Good luck

and disgusting

Noting the writers' past work, she's a new writer and while this story was a bit short, it shows promise.

For this up-n-cumming writer, recommend you spend a bit more time in building up to your ultimate climax. Sorry, no pun intended there, just spend a bit more time.

Your descriptive nature was nasty as hell and this is good. Rushing to the end tho is not...

I look forward to your next penned entry here.

Night~

short and not at all sexy... yuck... tasting your own shit, nasty.

Fantastic - loved it - especially rubbing her juices all over herself and taking that cock with her mothers juices and shit on it.

Hope you make a sequel or more like it!!!

I'm just like you. I just love smelling and tasting my pussy! Especially if I'm wet or right after I get done masturbating:) I will sniff my fingers forever afterwards.