All Comments on 'Beach Party for Three'

I had something similar happen. I went camping with my boyfriend and another couple. She got a call, apparently she had taken the keys to her mother car by mistake and had to drive back with them she called once she got home and said she was just going to stay home instead of driving back 2-1/2 hours. The three of us got drunk and high around the campfire and somehow they talked me into dancing naked in the fire light. I ended up getting fucked by both of them all night and into the morning. We had just finished a rather sweaty session when his girlfriend pulled up. I almost wished she wouldn’t have.

"She wanted to jump straight onto the bad and lay there naked..."

No. She wanted to jump straight onto the BED and LIE there naked...

I'd also suggest that if you are going to write erotica, it would possibly help to learn how to spell "masturbate".

Ignore the grammar police. Your story was great.

Very nice for a newer writer,