All Comments on 'Beach Weekend'

by jeninflorida

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JerrycuriousJerrycuriousover 13 years ago
Excellent Story

Remarkably well written. Can't wait for the next chapter.

BFG85BFG85over 13 years ago
Swingers eh?

Well as long as everyone gets it then all is good.

bob005abob005aover 13 years ago
Great start

I also am waiting anxiously for the next chapter..love it so far and you are leading into some wild sex .....

belvoriangarathbelvoriangarathover 13 years ago
Loved it

As always, Love the way you write. The teasing is unbearable. Can't wait.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 13 years ago
Great start!

Already a very hot story with more to come. Love the slow, teasing pace. Gave it a sense of realism.

MrsCCfromRCMrsCCfromRCover 13 years ago
Wonderful

Love to hear more... perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good story

Great story. Write next part

ChastitySmithChastitySmithover 10 years ago
Nice start!

We look forward to reading more. Love your concept of how it all starts. And between some couples, a couple of years of flirting and double entendres do result in something erotically special.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very well written. What I like about it is it is very plausible that something like this could happen. The one thing that I would have enjoyed was the two girls indulging in a little make out session and possibly some conversation among the entire group about what was happening and what could happen.

thongdudthongdudover 1 year ago

yeah, I liked it; doggy both couples, Im hoping.

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