by pacifist91w
WTF did I just waste 10 minutes skimming through ? .... Wrong site ya fat fuck
remarkable
well written , engaging & interesting tale, dealing with some very dificult topics
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5 star.
Such a lovely story. Knowing that he would move on, Janice was very brave.
Your work conveyed a positive aura that flowed through the sexual scenes. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you.
I enjoyed it but the ending just kind of sprang up out of no where. It was surprising to me because of all the build up in the beginning of the story. I exspected a consistent flow throughout. That is the only thing I can nit pick though.