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All Comments on 'Beau of Les Belles Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Interesting Beginning

As an introduction to more chapters, this story intrigued me greatly. I can't wait to see what happens next!

About the only thing I didn't like is the excessive whining by the boy. I think you could have cut his whimpering in half and the sentiment would have come across just as well.

Keep writing, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
May the writer and those who enjoy this enjoy the

pleasures afforded the victim

ls2256ls2256over 1 year ago

I am really liking this.

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