All Comments on 'Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful Ch. 01'

by Dale Jane Henparty

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NMDJobNMDJobover 7 years ago
Santa's fling

Very good story. I think the story benefits from the lack of conversation. It is told from Santa's perspective and the man has an eye for detail. I never considered if Santa had a sex life, now I wonder if I can catch him when he drops by the next year,

Seriously, well written erotic story. It's kinky and fun. I can't offer any suggestions for improvement because I don't see any...it's just a gem of a story!

Casey5940Casey5940over 7 years ago
Very Fun

Love the trajectory of the story line. Santa being a horny, fat, old bastard, warms my heart.

amarlanamarlanabout 7 years ago

Santa's always associated with gift giving. This time it is penis and cum giving. Interesting and unusual story line.

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I am a ‘Mature,’ by Literotica’s definition; I am living with a nasty thinking writer captured inside of me. The writer is mentally female and can create straight and special stories. She was named ‘Dale Jane Hen-Party’ by my family for three seasons when I was twelve years o...