All Comments on 'Beautiful Discovery'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Good story. Made me tingly. :)

I really like the reassurance throughout and the care after. He challenged her in positive ways. A fresh breath amid the usual darkness here abouts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A Slow Start

I didn't much like the part in front of the Waffle House, but the rest of it more than made up for that. I liked the outdoor at a tree thing. I've fantisized about almost the same thing that happened to her, only w/o the blindfold & I was standing. But so close to my own heart!!!

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