All Comments on 'Beautiful Liars'

by Kash_the_priest

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nice

Nice work. Good idea on separating the story by days, makes it easier to get to the good bits tha second time around.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot!

That was a really hot story. I loved it. Especially the part where they both jerk the guy off with their feet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Better than my own imagination!

As with all males, I watched the Beautiful Liars video with the same thing in mind. You really did an incredible job. I hope you continue to do more MFF stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Loved it

That was just the best story ever! I love Shakira and the way you built up the relationship was great and the double foot job, unbelievable! Words can't do this story justice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
cool

great read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
This must be what paradise is like

Great story. Especially enjoyed the anal stuff. What I wouldn't do to be the male character in this story, with access to 2 of the hottest asses on the planet!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
aaah

Characterless crap.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great

To the last comment, you want shit with character? Go read a fucking book! You want an awesome sex story with two of the best ass' read this! This story was so hot.

monstuman443monstuman443over 15 years ago
awesome

awesome story man! this was really well writen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Keep it up!!

absolutely great!!! i could almost picture it! with me in place of u of course keep it up!! thw two on one is great!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Anal heaven!

For someone with a total fixation on Shakira's ass, it's hard to ask for more from a story. Love the way both women suck his cock clean after it's been buried deep inside Shakira's shit chute.

Paul ReaganPaul Reaganover 13 years ago
Awesome job!

Great story as usual, you do a great job including "normal" things in your stories, adding to their realism. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Daaaaaaaaaaaamn

Best celebrity story ive ever read, great build up as well

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Loved the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

hot as hell

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

You're a fucking artist

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story

Gotta admit that was very well written and good build up

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