All Comments on 'Beautiful Shopper Get Tricked'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Beautiful Shopper review

I enjoyed your story and liked how the shopper was strung along in the interrogation room. There's a little plausibility issue with the putting the merchandise on her without her feeling it or remembering she bumped into him earlier, but still a good read. Thank you.

Greystreet0523Greystreet0523over 14 years ago
Every job has its benefits

Dave made one mistake in not using his fingers to find out if she got wet while sucking his cock. He could have at least returned the oral favor for her. I can't see how anyone could believe that he would be able to get this lovely thing in his power, again. I would have wanted to eat that shaved pussy until she had cum all over my face. I always say that you have to take advantage of unique opportunities when they present themselves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Keep it up!

Hey, good story! Ended a little too quickly considering the build up, but liked it nevertheless.. maybe an encore could be arranged? :)

Homer_J_SimpsonHomer_J_Simpsonover 13 years ago
Magnificent!

I like how the girl was a babe.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
disappointing

you should have had the girl show some resitence or something it is super short

CharlieCastillo9CharlieCastillo9about 2 years ago

When the girl resists and resists and pleading is better.

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