All Comments on 'Beautiful Young Alpha Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Sorry this story has turned into a total female on female fest and that is not for me. Not against it for others but it does nothing for me. Good luck..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Story is out of balance

Chapter is 80% sex and 18% plot 2% character development

You write much better than this :(

djb

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I thought this was a werewolf story,,seems to be more girl on girl action than anything else,not much of a plot,,not what i was looking for,,

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NOTE: read these three stories in this order; 1st - You Can't Deny Your Wolf. 2nd - The Beautiful Young Alpha. 3rd - The Chosen One. ~ I try to write easy to read stories with sexual content containing characters who have fluid sexuality. They contain obscure references, q...

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