All Comments on 'Beauty'

and looking forward to more.

This was an excellent piece!

More, more, more

Very creative. Enjoyed it

You write quite well - no grammatical errors that I noticed, with a very natural smooth flow to it - as well as what looks to be a really good story! It is such a nice and unexpected treat to find writers, and there are a few, on this site who value their readers enough to pay attention to the whole writing package. I see you're utilizing the recent "Zombie Apocalypse" scare as subject matter for your story. Interesting... I really hope you decide to extend this chapter into a full-fledged, full length story. I say five stars on your first chapter!

I loved this --thanks

My favorite show to appear on television! I've always want someone to make a story like this...I even thought to make one myself but I decided not to. Lol atleast someone had the courage. I'll definetly be watching for updates. U have a new fan. <3

Loving this story.

This may be your first submission, it's obviously not your first written piece. Very well done and so utterly complete for a 1 page submission. Can't wait for more from you!

Nice story. Is this the end? Will there be more? Loved it!

this was too cute!!! love it!

I have no idea what was completely going on, but I gather an apocalypse and dead people crying and love..... altogether it was a very cute story. I loved it and wouldn't mind more lol

LoL