All Comments on 'Beauty and the Beast'

Nice start. Please continue

Love it but too short

More... please!

Hope to find a new chapter in the near future (:

why would Lucifer fight an angel and not god? why would the other archangels not come to help? how do you have angels having sex and getting pregnant?

Looks good. Its kinda short. Update soon?

I like it

This first chapter is intriguing. Your writing style accomplished. I wish you'd hit the apostrophes and commas a bit more, but the language makes up for so much.

I'm ready for more.