All Comments on 'Beauty and the Beast Ch. 03'

This is turning into a great story. Please Continue. These short chapters keep me wanting more and more. I do wish they were longer but as long as you keep writing I don't care ;)

Very good I also like the short way. Keep it up.

There does seem to be a purpose to these short chapters, and it's working. I wish you would slow down just a bit and give us the lay of the land. All this seems to happen of a pretty empty stage.

The one thing I would change is the line about not wearing any clothes. That's something you could have shown us, and it's jarring to have the plot advanced through dialogue.

Keep on writing.

Your three chapters combined could have been one. Seriously there should be a system in place that lets users know if a story has been finished as this unfinished story business gets really frustrating.

This is where they posted the fic they stole from you:

https://archiveofourown.org/works/20273317/chapters/48056251