by magmaman
Just loved the story and it's flow. After years this is the first story that I have ever commented on and that is because of the "smooth" flow and the beautiful payback at the end. Keep up the good work, even though I hope that you can eventually top this tale I have my doubts that it can be done.
always wanting their women to do more and more things to get their rocks off...hope she ends up screwing Stan good and proper.....
What, pray tell, is a "full half hour"? You have used this in several stories. Is it a full hour, or a half hour?
The modifiers work well individually, but not together.
Yes, it's a minor complaint.
I know this is an old story but it was good. Surprised so few comments. Thank you. Mel B known as Hornydevil47