All Comments on 'Because I Still Love You Ch. 01'

leaving sans closure is rendering, TK U MLJ LV NV

they should have never married.

why did they get married if she's leaving anyways that makes no sense he should have left with her or her stay

I liked the story,there are elements of pathos here,ken has his demons,lea has her issues that will mske for drama.The marriage confused me....did they get married and then she is moving away or is that a flash forward? It was a bit confusing....I look fowatd to the rest.

This is fragmented, they never should have married, did they actually marry? It's just too confusing. And you need an editor.

I can't wait til, you add more to this story. And please do not end it as, a cliff hanger !!!

You started losing me at "a red-haired brunette"

A brunette has brown hair, or in more recent use black hair also.

Usually has a darker complexion.

Red-haired people usually have a lighter complexion.

Too many fragments without links between them.