All Comments on 'Because of What We Saw'

by Otazel

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GybbsGybbsabout 6 years ago
what might have been ...

...but at that age I was too chicken! Thanks for letting me know what I'd missed out on ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Quality of Writing

One can see the many stories this writer can tell; but the writing of this story is so fresh that it seems one's real experience, the way good literature should be. This could easily be a chapter in a novel about coming out. It is superb writing.

bimale63bimale63about 6 years ago
Perfect

Enjoyed many mutual masterbation seccions with my cousins when I was very young and mutual blow jobs and anal before I ever had a girlfriend very found memories this brought back great story

o2byoungo2byoungabout 6 years ago
This story did me a favor!

At 76 I don't think I've had a full erection in about 3 years. This story was so hot, I was not only feeling highly aroused, I actually was at about half mast! Very well written, and I love these types of first time stories. Nice job, Otazel.

sober71sober71about 6 years ago

It pushed all my buttons, as I am bi and enjoy a nice cock, it took me back to my early teens, such excitement and discovery. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Excellent

Fantastic story! Well written and very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wow

I really enjoyed your story it brought back memories of my early teens. The first time was with two brothers 14 and 15 I was younger than them. We had many good times but never did anal because we never thought of it. Later on the 14 year old and I did it a lot together until we got caught by my Uncle. That became another story.

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