All Comments on 'Because the Night'

Very well told as usual but a couple of points.Firstly if Marcus was submissive as a gay lover the condom doesn't quite add up being in his pocket. Secondly the ending was a little weak. It might have been better stopping at the moment of discovery and leaving the rest to ones imagination.

Rachel, Rachel, you beautiful woman . . . you left us all hanging (or not hanging at all, as it were . . .)! This had better be part 1, as you need to give us more of the story. Who does the magnificently hung Ben eventually fuck? Brigitte? Marcus? both??!! (I, for one, hope it's the latter.) Tell us. Your mind is normally delightfully imaginative, so keep going on this one.

PG Antioch