All Comments on 'Because We Both Want To'

Tender and loving, well written.

My only caveat is that he should have eaten her sweet pussy. How could he pass that up?

I didnt expect such a well written story when I clicked on it. it really surprised me alot. You are a good writer. And after reading this, Im gonna see if you have more stories, and read then. Im going to vote you a "5" I really liked this story.

I have no brother, so I feel cheated. I love stories of incest, especially between siblings, but I will never have the experience myself. Thank you for a wonderful, loving, gentle story. I'm going to read it again now, and masturbate along with their nice fucking.

Susan

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You did a wonderful job. I LOVED it. very sexy and sweet. makes me wonder if they will keep it up. My guess is YES!

forget about those starting like a cheap $5 DVD. write romantic stories with feelings, emotions, tragedy, and sorrow and hope. and, yes, write about erotic sex, too! like this

I usually have a hard time reading long blocks of text on the computer, but once I started your story I was hooked! Very romantic and sensual. I thought the burst of dirty talk at the end broke the mood and maybe could have been saved for a later story, but that's just my view and it didn't keep me from enjoying your story. Please write more with these characters!

Intensity, sincere emotion, great descriptives, and all with a sense of humor. More? I'm not sure that that'd be the best thing (it seems to be a piece in itself, without needing more to be complete) but, naturally, I will be reading more of your stories, at least. Thank you.

Very sweet, romantic and sexy. I think that now that they have tasted the forbidden fruit they won't be able to stop no matter what. It seems to me that they have both found what they've been always looking for so a sequel with the same characters would be a very nice idea.

Very nice story but I must agree that both being experienced lovers there should have been mutual oral sex .

Your only redemption is to continue the tale .

Thanks and good karma to everyone who sent me these excellent comments. Both the public comments and the nice emails have made my day. What little criticism there is has been spot-on and I mostly agree with it. (Thanks Michael and Prismatic in particular)

Personally I feel that this story has some problems and may get a re-write someday. Apparently though this hasn't stopped people form enjoying it. You're all very welcome.

A note on the lack of oral sex in this story: I left it out for a reason. It's all part of the dynamic of two people attracted to each other, but in conflict with their feelings about a questionable situation. The way things progressed it didn't seem natural for them to engage in that activity, and I think if either one of them had tried it would have broken the magic of the moment.

My characters tend to write themselves, so what happens is more a product of their psychology than what I tell them to do. In my way I usually end up telling a story that happens to be erotic, rather than writing about sex and clothing it in a story.

For those of you who are particularly into oral sex, I suggest you read "Who's that Girl?" and/or "Halloween Masque" from my list of stories. That ought to give you your fix for that particular kink.

Happy reading!

in which incest is handled

so sensitively and delicately

This was an excellent story of brother/sister incest. The delicate way you handled the topic made it just the best. Thank you for sharing your considerable talent.

Wow, you're good. You write so very well.

What an amazing story. Well written. Lets have some more, please

good but needs more we need to know what happens later when they see each other at family parties and reunions do they fuck again or just savor the memories you need to tell us soon

I thought it was a beautiful little sibling romantic interlude. It actually seemed believable. Thanks for your story.

why can't they make love after the night? Obviously they weren't feeling guilty about the night, so why feel guilty if they have sex afterwards?

id probably fuck my sis, but i wouldn't initiate it lol... shes hot though, great writing man

that story was delicious, i would love to fuck my younger brother like that.

Very nicely done! Good pacing and a reasonable scenario. Makes me wish I had a sister!

to unrealistic why fuck her only one night that is just stupid. if you fuck a stranger one night that is fine because you will probably never see them again. if you fuck a relative just one night then every time you see them you will wonder if it should have happened or not and if it should have continued. this will just drive them apart and ruin any relationship they had in the past. when it comes to sex and relatives either never do it or keep doing it the only other option is do it and never see each other ever again. so in other words this needs a major rewrite and a good editor or needs to be moved to the fantasy area.

Brothers & Sisters are forever. Whatever happens between two consenting adults is licit. No harm done!

Is a good story, thought the ending was appropriate, no mattter how we'd like for them to run off into the sunset, these types of relationships shouldn't and don't last.

She would not wash her panties in the lavatory - thats the toilet bowl. She would use the basin.

Otherwise a good flow and worthy of a followup

Please do a sequel to this story. This is one of my favorites on here and has been since you wrote it.

simple it has a shitty end they need to keep fuckin

Thanks for writing this! The story was pretty good... But there was something different about the writing style that was really intriguing and refreshing that made it really enjoyable :). ...funny, I cant really describe it, but it was obvious right away.

:)

Spoiled by the crap about the pill

This is story land no real babies

Superb writing. Character development, pacing, dialogue---were all wonderful. And they were both old enough to know what they were doing---Not just slaves to the hormones!

Oh, and the lavatory/basin thing mentioned above: I believe you'll find that's just a difference between British and American English. Polite Americans don't use the word Toilet (we call it the Commode), but Brits and most Europeans do. They think Americans are really childish/repressed to call the room the Bathroom, while to them the Bathroom is the room where you take a bath.

Hope you'll come back and write some more stories of this calibre!

Spoiled by the crap about the pill

This is story land no VD or babies

Could have been nice if they said more about what they are going to do afterwards..

Good premise.

But sex moves ahead too fast.

Four stars.

Great description of fucking, loved the description of a cock finding a way to a new cunt the first time!

Beautiful story. Absolutely beautiful. The ending spoiled it for me though. This isn't rebound sex, not with the tenderness that it was described. It was the epitome of lovemaking; the intimacy between the MCs clearly showed how profound and true their love is. Since the Author kind of left the ending open, i, notwithstanding the indications in the text, am going to assume a happily ever after.

5 stars, but the ending stopped me from adding this to my favourites.

Its incredble thsi I have read this so well written story full of tenderness,love..and MAKING LOVE.This is the way a sister and brother should have during what society would call"illicit love".However i think that its IMPOSSIBLE that their relationwould end after one night only.I had same experience with my sister. It was so beautiful. We are still together,though secretly aince ...12 years.J rate this story 9/10!

Don't let it be over, move in together and live as husband and wife.