by Franco Pauli
....no story at all here. "Man a Pig-Woman fool for tolerating it for 20 years -she cheats-it was better- bye bye"...absolutely stupid....
The other comments that is.
Not a bad story, but I kind of doubt that she will live happily ever after with a man who invaded her home and raped her the first time they met. The author would have us believe that true love has changed him, but I find that a stretch. Still, I guess she thought the excitement was worth the risk and many women have found that to be a poor trade off.
she's too old to have kids safely, not too mention the sex made my stomach churn. Thanks for ruining my hardon faster than my ex-wife ever could.
Proves that Literotica will let any thing be posted (regardless of how disgusting it is). The folks who host this site certainly do NOT know the definition of "erotic." Otherwise filth like this would never surface.
Review and edit! this is terrible. Key words and phrases are missing! Dialogue is sparse for first half, the oddly arranged once it started!
2*