All Comments on 'Becca at the Bar'

My cock is so hard I imagine me nailing her not her clothes! Ugh my 10 inch cock NEEDS pussy!

What kind of degenerate faps to this? Or wrote it? Get in the basket.

The concept of coercion, humiliation, public display is intriguing to me; but give the woman some dignity. Make her more appealing. Make the setting more appealing.

Can't you make her elegant, beautiful, appealing? Can't the place be sparklingly clean, elegant. Make it a place that might be exciting to do something on a dare. How about a private dining area in an elaborate hotel or casino?

The woman is humiliated enough to be coerced into this. Why is she doing it? Let's have a compelling reason for her to participate. What would it take for your wife to fuck in public? Nice intriguing idea. Try again, with more sophistication.

There are plenty of stories with elegance, friend. You did just fine with this one. Cheers.

Extraordinarily well-written. I loved the final image.