All Comments on 'Becca the Punisher Pt. 02'

by AnonymousHoppingBunny

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Come on ---Really?????

A vigilante that only ties up a scum bag and leaves him with a vibrating cock ring?

That's really not much of a punishment for a person of authority that has taken non consensual liberties with drugged students. As a writer you need to develop your stories into just that -- a story. This is just a semi detailed wordy outline. I say this as a husband to a USA bestselling erotic romance author. Please take the time to really develop the plot and the story that fits the idea or characters that you start off describing, rather than throw down some 1/2 finished ideas and post it.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

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