All Comments on 'Becky Ch. 01'

Wow...I liked this one a lot...kinda rough, but so is the heroine. She is fueled by revenge and the excitement of the forbidden...this will be a great series...

Your ex girlfriend has become whore and has had unprotected sex with a strange man that likes to fuck prostitutes so she now has some kind of std or sti but at least she showed you that she is adventurous in bed.

Stupid beyond belief.

whats erotic here, just drivel

Great Story. I am looking forward to your follow up chapters. Consider some continued revenge!