All Comments on 'Becky the Hypnotist'

by GeorgieH

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JerrycuriousJerrycuriousover 11 years ago
Good Read

Very hot and descriptive. Need to see more.

JeffH66UKJeffH66UKover 9 years ago
Soooo titillating...

I'm amazed this lovely tale only received 1 comment. It's well written and interesting, lovely romp. Thanks Georgie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Becky is older.

Your first paragraph doesn't match with the rest of your story's information or tone. You should change it to say Becky was born first followed 13 months later by her brother.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A great story

Light and cute and well written.

Kathleen48Kathleen48about 9 years ago
Loved it

Just the right speed of development for a brother sister story. Quite believable. Wish there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Different from your usual incest stories

But still a great read. Love the way you write. Keep it up. Warren

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Definitely different, but lots of fun!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Oh pregnant!

I love it 5 stars and a love story...

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Always searching. Now I'm back writing a lot as well. I want to thank everyone for some great feedback, and as promised, new chapters of all sorts of tales will appear very soon. I want to thank everyone who has taken the time to send me messages (mostly) of support, and I wan...