All Comments on 'Becoming a Domme Ch. 01-02'

"Kasey always wondered why she wasn't interested in boys, but in time (and with the help of the internet) discovered that she was really interested in girls." With this realization Kasey would make a rather dangerous Dominatrix towards males. In my opinion.

Can't wait to read where you take this one

Kasey has the base of a very strong character. Moving from recognition to action so quickly is truly rare in the real world. You have done a great job keeping her evolution believable. The potential Kasey is offering is limitless. Can't wait to see where this one takes you.

Hot, very hot.

Anticipation and suspense. Great story, needs followup story

Very erotic until after Kasey has had her orgasms courtesy of Joel. Then it was rushed. It seems as if you were too much in a hurry to get to the last line.

There were so many options: Kasey could have directed Janice to take care of Joel -- perhaps first with a handjob and then with a blowjob. While that was going on she could have had Joel kiss her, kiss her boobs, he could have and play with them, then continue with the usual pussy and ass eating. Janice would be getting more and more excited. Then, perhaps, when Joel had blown his load there could have been a natural transition into Janice being given the opportunity to replace him servicing Kasey.

I gave it 4 stars. I'd like to see more.

Exciting story and very well written.