All Comments on 'Becoming a Patient of Doctor Lisa Ch. 02'

It's such a pleasure to read a well written, and well thought out story. Your grammar is quite nice; resist pressure from "strokers" to fill the pages with hardcore. Conversely, if you intend it to be more than 5 or 6 chapters, you'll lose part of your fan audience - myself included. So, lengthen the chapters (3 or 4 pages), limit submissions to 5 or 6, and then move on to your next work. You have talent.

The characters are continually being groomed into very believable people. The story so far is being brought along slowly and makes everything knit together. Thanks for the well done chapter.

So far the story is moving along nicely not to fast and not to slow. Keep up the good work I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Very well written. Waiting for your next installment.

Great story so far. I really look forward to reading future chapters and see what Lisa has in store to help her brother out.

Great story so far, I'm eager to find out what happens next.

I would greatly appreciate you continuing this story.

This storyline is looking very good. I hope you continue.

Please let's have more of this story, it is superb, very well written.

this is no place to end your story please continue soon seven months is to long to wait don't be like the other 90% of the writers here finish what you start please

You do need to continue your wrting. You have a great way of putting things. That has to be one of most interesting stories I read in along time.

Please keep the good work.

With kind regards,

Michael

another lazy wannabe writer that gets the readers hooked then leaves them hanging. we need a delete button or the useless webmasters need to start an UNFINISHED catagory and start moving unfinished stories into it. this was a total waste of our time and the sites space. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND SOME RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED OR REMOVE IT NOW

Well written nice character develolpment and plot development and the sex scene is well handled and atmospheric.

But I have been waiting a fair while for a continuation chapter, hurry please

if this is the way you are going to leave the story you should have left it unposted. either finish this now or delete it now it is unfair to the readers to leave it unfinished. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS FINISH WHAT YOU START OR DON'T START AT ALL.

I think you have written this very nicely and it seems a very thoughtful story. I would love it to continue, but I know there are many reasons why a writer can have distractions or become interested in other story lines. I have voted 5*****

Best regards, Jane

why is it all the GOOD stories get left UNFINISHED? i wish the webmasters would start demanding that all stories be finished or deleted. if this ass wont finish it i wish he would find a good ghost writer to finish it for him. half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half.

Want more, much more of this exciting story!

Please continue with this story. I have really enjoyed it so far.

As it's been over 6 years since these first two chapters were published, we're not going to ever find out how this ends, are we ?

Which is a real shame as the beginning was really very good.

Never mind, eh !

Hope there's going to be more as I didn't seem to read anything about incest

Waiting for Chapter 3.

Fantastic story.....keep it up. ......Can't wait for chapters 3, 4, 5 & many more!!!!

Really enjoying where this is going and the style, please continue