by ChloeLatex69
This is insane, I appreciate people writing to their own interests but WOW. Logically speaking he should be already out the door or have taken the heads off of several people. I will give you a better score than I would normally rate it because you have written well but wow.
Excited to read more, see how he reacts and how the changes are carried out. Loving the story so far.
If I knew this was a incomplete work, I would not have started reading it. It has good potential. With that much techno ledge and funds, the possibilities of astounding gadgets and equipment for sexual stimuli, are immense. I am anxiously waiting for the next episodes. Will you email me when the next chapter is available?
edwardreg@yahoo.com Edrubber