All Comments on 'Becoming a Sexier Wife Ch. 01'

And? When does she fuck someone else and feed him a creampie? or turn into a dyke and fuck the salesclerk.

I found this story to be a wonderful variation on the more usual "loving wife" motiff. If the author chooses to extend the story into more chapters, the potential for interesting developments is very great, but it stands on its own like a small jewell. Nice work!

Very good start, would like to see this continue. Can think of many interesting plot twists, thinking a 3 some at the corset shop would be a great part 2. Good luck

...cathartic yet lacking in tension so not exactly gripping.

..Good writing developing Mary's sexual drive, so write about Mary's job as the erotic F*** masseuse at the African nudist obese swingers resort near San Diego,,she is popular & averages 20 half hour "sessions" per day & is live on the internet 24/7 Mary really Loves mounting the huge horse-size hung Nigerian basketball players massive cocks ,What fun ,, Looking forward to Mary's hot humping "massage" stories,,,,,

Great story of a loving wife who knows how to use her sexiness to please both her husband and herself. Her plan for transitioning from a 'dowdy' looking wife to a hot babe for her man was inspiring. I will have my wife read this great story!

What was erotic or sexy about that? A followed by B followed by C. You could not have made it any more predictable or boring if you tried. UGH!

Once again, ignore the idiot anons- they don't have anything to offer. This is a nice start, and I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Great story wish my wife would do that for me.

Good story.if you don't lose it.

I enjoyed their obvious attraction for each other.

Very sensual story. Mary’s sexual transformation is the dream of every man.

loved it