All Comments on 'Becoming a Slave Ch. 04'

i love this story and i would love to read the next chapter ,it is a very erotic and moving tale .

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I didn't expect this story to turn out like this. But I like this chapter most and hope to read lots more. I like how you create the story - it's like you don't know yourself where this will lead - just like real life! Great!

The character quality of your writing in chapter 04 is back to your usual standard. I don't buy into complete strangers falling in love this quickly. That Bruce and Geoff do is not my issue. "I had fallen in love with another man and wanted to serve him for the rest of my life." Great final line for a chapter 05. Bruce was being a cockslut on Craigslist just before meeting Geoff!

I was wondering when Bruce would finally admit that he was gay. It is so liberating when you admit to yourself that you are gay. It took me about a year to realize that I was gay. I did because I had not had decor wanted sex with a woman since I had sucked my first cock. All I wanted was to suck cock and be fucked. I am a cum loving cock sucked and bottom whore. I had one relationship with a guy for about two years which was great. He got a transfer with his job and I now just get together with other gay men and enjoy the sex.

This masochistic stuff is not for me. I don’t get it.