All Comments on 'Becoming a Submissive'

MMM, this is hot! I appreciate the loving, consensual aspect. Thanks.

A good opening chapter with excellent characterization and plenty of action. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Your ability to describe the introduction to being a sub is impressive at the least. I will read the other chapters soon! Thank you.

Great story... i was so completely aroused ! I only wish i was in her position..

what a fantastic hot horny story. love the reading of it you had my cock hard from start to finish brilliant writing awesome story do please. write more of this awesome story.

Please keep this story going! It's off to a steaming start.

Becoming a Submissive sounds "scarey", but exciting, it is so well written, explaining pleasures I've never experienced. I would so love to be a sub to my sister, or some one just as passionate and caring.