All Comments on 'Becoming a Submissive Ch. 03'

I enjoyed the writing, the story and by the end felt as if I knew you... a little. Whatever I can do to encourage you to continue writing, conside it done. Thank you.

A really good story. The three chapters were well written with very good characterization and clear description of the scenes.

Please do write some more about these two characters.

Great story! So many stories in this vein quickly degenerate into a bloodbath that the writer seems to like more than the reader. This story had just enough of "rough stuff" to keep a keen edge but balanced it well with a lot of sexual activity which should please most readers of erotic fiction. I WOULD like you to continue this story by letting Mom get over her inhibitions and realize she is very submissive herself to such a dominant daughter.

Because she'd probably be dead.

Nice story . Want more in series with new limits

Tried to look at this being revolting, endet finding it hilarious. Silly borderline to infantile. Incest from the kindergarten wanna make believe dusty shelf.

No later how hard you try, you don’t have it.

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Really unlikable characters.

If you are still adding to this story. What and how will you continue? Will there be an ending or conclusion? Introduce your characters better. Who was Jimmy, Rick?