All Comments on 'Becoming Big Brother's Favorite'

Great story!!. Thanks for taking the time to write it for us!

Funny and hot! A really enjoyable story.

More!! Please more!!

great story, great ending!

you have to do many more chapters pleeeeaaassseee this story is so good =D

Substantive debut, with a nice twist.

You really have a talent and should definitely continue writing whether it be chapters for this story or something completely different

Such a great story. Really turned me on. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us all.

By george I think someones knickers be in a twist! Hey. you there, commenter full of piss and vinegar. Shut the fuck up.

Nice twist there at the end haha well done.

This was awesome! I loved the twist in the end. I probably would have thought the same thing if I saw my brother coming out of my sisters room... Very well written. Can't wait to read more!!!

Outstanding, plot, development, and style!

That was crazy good

It seems to me a little ridiculous how so many authors here seem to think the hymen is located midway up the vaginal channel, whereby they state having their penis several inches inside before encountering it. Since the hymen IN REALITY is located just inside the vaginal sphincter maybe a 1/4 - 1/2" inside the labia minora, these so called "big" dicks would have to be a maximum of 1" long if they encountered the hymen after being hallway inserted. Do the research and state true facts. It will make the stories more realistically believable. Human vaginas with hymens halfway up the channel do not exist on this planet..... maybe on some alien world with a different sentient species, but NOT here.

The ending was a complete surprise, although it was awesome you should make another

Oh my god that was great. Sweet, sexy and the ending was a complete surprise. You're a brilliant writer.

This is one of the best stories that I have ever read on this site. You are a wonderful author. It is really hot! Made me get it out!

Nice development and a good twist! overall it was a nice story! Keep it up.