All Comments on 'Becoming Ch. 01'

Good start to the story! Nice idea so I'm looking forward to the rest!

Love the small breasts and hard nipples.

Keep it up - I loved the first chapter and can't wait for the rest. Audra's desire will make her eventual triumph all the sweeter.

To that one anon...the author says at the very beginning that there's no BE yet. Not her fault you can't be bothered to read an A/N.

Anyway, great start! I'm looking forward to future chapters. Only criticism is that I was a little confused by the changing room scene, since I didn't immediately realize it was a flashback. I think it would've been more clear if that paragraph was italicized or something.

You've peaked my interest... Plus I love huge tits!

Bro can't wait for the next part please post it soon

I like your writing style and am definitely looking forward to more chapters (and bigger tits). Have fun writing!

This is great. I can't wait for the next part

Love the detail. Hope the ext part comes out soon.