All Comments on 'Becoming Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A long as wait for this!?!?!

A chapter?!? More like a paragraph!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
The best

please mooooar :D

Farben0192Farben0192almost 7 years ago
Thank You for Sharing

I am looking forward to the next installment. Hopefully this next one won't take two months. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Simple but Effective

Your prose is very natural and your characters, though simple, feel real. You've got a solid story coming along and I encourage you to write more often.

TLMorganTLMorganover 6 years ago

Hope you finish this series. Would be a shame to see her newly grown tits gone to waste.

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