All Comments on 'Becoming Ch. 02'

Now this is a motherfucking writer! Great story!

Oh my! This story has my attention!

This is interesting, and salacious. Great combination.

Hopefully you'll pick the threads up again, soon.

Great story keep it going

imagine my chagrin when i got to the end of chapter two only to find there is no chapter three! What the fuck, dude?! Or dudette! you can't leave your readership hanging like this! You have a new take on the incubus story and we're expecting to revel in the glorious rutting of the ravenous beast he has become and instead are treated to over nine years of silence! Uncool! Very uncool. You want me to take it up? cuz i will! Damn Damn Damn! I guess i have to look at an author's story list and their dates before i get involved from now on. You SUCK! Still a way BIG 5-STAR story, though