All Comments on 'Becoming Hers Ch. 04'

Love this series so much!!!

This is great stuff! Please keep going. I'm going to introduce my wife to this type of play through your stories!

Love this series. Nice pace and direction.

Your story line keeps backing off. I liked Alex having to each his own, but you should’ve carried it further. Sometimes your storyline seems that it’s for Alex minute should be for Karen

make him eat her bloody cunt mmmm

“I've been thinking, and shaving is for little bitches like you, not me." She roughly patted his smooth balls for emphasis. "I'm going to grow it out, so you can worship a woman's pussy."

Bingo! After years of reading Lit, a writer/character finally voiced my opinion. If I let myself think about it, bald pussy gives me a creepy pedo vibe I don’t want to experience. I don’t shave my pubes but I would for a woman like Karen.

Simply the best I have ever read! This story and its development are just amazing.

I hope you find the time and interest to write another series.

This guy may be this fucking pussy whipped, to enjoy this Torture And Denial. But if it was me I could put up with most of this play, but once she became this bitch that she is now, it would stop being a game to me. Next I'd stop by the hardware store get a small set of bolt cutest and cut that damn toy off MY cock. As soon as she walked in the door after work, I'd rip all of her clothes off her. Tie her to the bed and rape her including fucking her ass, then I'd shave her fucking hairy ass pussy and eat her Nonstop until till her passed out. Put a long over coat on her and ball gag in her mouth, oh yes her panties would go in first. By the time the night was over, I'd her nipples and clothes hood Pierced with good size gold rings and while were there, I'd have her tattooed above her pussy, "Property of Alex". Take that bitch..

I think the play is a little too unrealistic here. Alex seems new and she seems intent on breaking him, which is strange for a long time partner. I get the sense that she’s unable to control her actual anger, which is a bad sign for a dominant.