All Comments on 'Becoming Hers Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Videos

If the videos they were watching actually exist please share the titles

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Another Awesome read!!

Loving this series more each ch!!!

DifferentBreedDifferentBreedover 6 years ago
Fun story

Not everyone plays the same way and that’s what fetishes are all about. Trying to make characters fit into everyone’s box of what their expectations are is impossible. This couple is discovering as they go and that exploration makes this feel genuine and entertaining.

realbigsid69realbigsid69over 6 years ago
Very good build up

I really like the point in their exploration and fun having sex based on her satisfaction first and giving her more control. I know how difficult it can be getting excited actually writing the build up and you've done a good job keeping it leisurely and languid, accentuating the calm enjoyment she displays and the desperation he has initially for himself then increasingly around satisfying her. Great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Chapter 5

It appears that things are building to a climax at some point. Hopefully it will be worth waiting for.

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