All Comments on 'Becoming his Whore'

And she loves it? A painful ass rape and she's begging for more. Poor taste and vile.

honestly with as lubed up as his cock is from fucking her sweet little pussy if he finds the right spot yes ass raping can turn a girl on...big time i know this for a fact

Nope nope nope. Try again. By the way, should have been in non-consent.

So sad :(

Everyone is a critic. Keep doing what you want. Be it right or wrong let your freak flab fly!!!

"Everyone is a critic."

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Yeah, well, so are you. At least they commented on the story while you commented on them. Exactly how are THEY the haters?

Listen I don't care if the comments are negative or positive. I appreciate the feedback it was my first attempt at writing erotica. However the first time I had anal sex it was by force and I did love it so I was writing that piece from my personal experience. .. Maybe I did put it in the wrong category and if you are offended in anyway I apologize. ..

Love, love, love it. I would love to read more... Huge on the incest stories and love the non consent...

Keep on keepin' on!

A debuts go, this is pretty damn solid. I do enjoy both the tone and all the themes running through this short story, but I would have loved to have seen it fleshed out a bit more.

You hardly give us the chance to get to know the characters and their motivations before the action takes off.

The action itself is well written and I for one don't mind stories that don't quite sound believable.

I'd love to see a story by you where to take a bit more time to flesh out everything, you have the imagination and enough skill at writing to pull it off.

In any case, I think I'll keep an eye out for more from you.

This story is so damn hot! I have often dreamed of taking my property in such a manner! And if she is teasing around the house well that just makes it hotter!

loved the story had my cock hard as hell and me cumming before i finished the story please keep posting i love to jack off to hot daddy daughter stories like this

Made me wish I had a daughter to make my fucktoy as I was stroking my cock

Am having a bit of writers block so writing has been hard . Hopefully more stories to come once I find people to inspire me lol

Daddy will show you later

Will show you later

Tell us about all the times you fucked her fertile cunt. Tell us all about the time she got pregnant and how you kept fucking her pussy and ass right up to the day she gave birth.

Hiya, got to say it's far better than my debut story I wrote for lit. But hey we all have to start somewhere. Look forward to what you have in store for your future works. Keep up the good work and do ignore the haters they just like to keep us authors down.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I do wish it was alittle longer and added a little more lead up to the main event. Like what has been going through dad's mind and for how long? Had you been teasing him for long? And was it on purpose? And if you still have writers block, just keep writing from your own experience. It's very exciting and I'd love to hear where you and your dad took this relationship! Easy 5 stars though.

It was good and short. I would have liked more.

Good one

Disgusting

Make up your mind !

Where's part 2?

Super hot