All Comments on 'Becoming Lisa's Pet Ch. 01'

Great mix of plot and imagery.

I think that I Will keep an eye out for more of this story it shows promise. Good job.

I liked it, as a beginning. I hope that you continue it as a series. because it was really good. I'd love to read more!! Thanks for writing!

omfg that was awesome i wuld go insane if u didn't contuine.

Please Continue cant wait to read more

Please continue this story soon

Hmmmm...please write more, that is a turn on that I had not expected. It was like I was feeling the same thing.