All Comments on 'Becoming ME Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Chapter 5??

Great story, can't wait for Chapter 5....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A pompous, arrogant and inept asshole...

..whom is obviously trying to hide his inadequacies. Unsuccessfully. "1*" !

49greg49gregalmost 11 years ago
Still great

Re-reading this after some time I still love it. Oh sure, in real life he would be a bastard, but this isn't real life. It's a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I feel sorry for Louise’s husband

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