All Comments on 'Becoming ME Ch. 05'

by mercianknight

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49greg49gregalmost 11 years ago
Good series.

I liked it, the whole series. I can see it ending here, but why not go on and do some more, perhaps start a year or so later. Or another series about how he finds other women to control. Or not, either way it's a great story, and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
liked it

Write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fabulous!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please write of more adventures with slut Louise.

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