All Comments on 'Becoming Mother Nature'

Suggest you pick a tense (past or present) for your writing AND STICK TO IT. This story keeps jumping around between past and present tenses, and that makes it very very hard to follow.

The writing is terrible with tons of typos and grammar mistakes. The dialogue felt forced and I'm unhappy with this story.

I believe you're not supposed to write stories about beastiality on here, but Angel has sex with multiple animals. I don't really know because I haven't read the rules in a long time, but that was my understanding.