All Comments on 'Becoming My Step Son's Ch. 01'

by MrSpunki

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Cant wait to read more

Turbulence1973Turbulence1973about 8 years ago

This was incredible! Probably the best I've read in a while. Truly looking forward to reading more of this couple.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

needs to be proofread before it is published alot of reading mistakes but still good

mountaincat4mountaincat4about 8 years ago
Great start

I'm a fan already. There's just something about a mature woman who gets right to the point. None of that coyness, game playing or teasing, just 'here i am, come and get it'.

Nice intro, you got to the action with a minimum of background but managed to set everything up so we knew what the story was. I agree with the other reader about getting somebody to proofread your story. The errors were not that disruptive but they still shouldn't be there.

TheKrrakTheKrrakabout 8 years ago
More please

Can't wait for future installments, keep em cumming.

5/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Step son fucking is not Incest

He is your husband's son with no blood relation to you.

May as well term sex with your husband's tailor as Incest!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Category is incest & taboo

Relax anonymous. While fucking her stepson isn't incest, it is taboo. Quit freaking out about the story not meeting your demands. The author made the relationship clear in the title. If you only want true incest, you didn't have to read this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Actually, whether just Taboo or Incest all depends on where you live. some places in the US it would be treated exactly like Incest, it all depends

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Age changed

From 41 to 39

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Like the story but she has a 39 year old pussy on her 40 year old body. Sloppy mistake

goatman96goatman96about 1 year ago

One page stores just don't cut the mustard

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Too Short!

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