All Comments on 'Becoming the Alpha Male'

I like the slow seduction Randy is doing to his mom. Masturbating together is a big step towards finally getting to fuck his mom.

I hope it will be soon.

Love the storyline and the story is well written and edited.

Thanks for the good read.

Your in the process of writing out my fantasy except your doing it much more eloquently and erotically then i've ever been able to manage. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Well written with a good buildup so far. The plot is interesting and the slowly intensifying relationship between mom and son is well done. I'm seeing many interesting paths for this story to take, with lots of potential for plot twists. Look forward to seeing where you take this. Great start.

This is an absolutely awesome story. Superbly written and with a believable plot. You can't leave it where it is though, you have to continue the story to its inevitable conclusion, her son has to fuck her!

Interesting plot device...serving to increase the heat and eroticism of this mother/son tale. Your talent for dialogue and descriptive prose only increases the sexiness of this story. Looking forward to the next!

You put a lot of effort into this detail wise. Bravo. That being said, there is a maxim of details getting in the way of the story. It's a wonderful story, just not much of a sex story.

not sure i could have stayed with a girl that turned me down all thru high school only to turn into a non filmed porn star. shy virgin to raging slut comes home and feels bad for not fucking the whole school before college? boo hoo

I have read my share of porn over a life time and I have to say, Bravo! I loved your creativity and your characters and I want to see more of it. I have not yet visited your collection and I do hope you have other stories to captivate me next, until you finish off this story. Please let me know when you plan to submit the remaining chapters of "Becoming the Alpha Male". Thank you on behalf of my wife, my teenage daughter and my self.

That was not unlike a fine expensive gourmet meal, just when it was getting so damned good and my juices were flowing. DAMMIT ! it was over, and left me with a hunger for more, as well as desert !

I liked the story but the golden shower really put a damper on it for me. Not into that whatsoever.

mom is the alpha

It started off very nice for about the first page and a half as very interesting, but then it was like you swapped writers and completely changed your style.

What a wonderful story. Great transformations among characters. Lovely vignettes interspersed amongst the main story

A very, very good story! Thank you!

I quit reading when the girl started playing around with her asshole. I'm seventy five years old and I promise you none of this would ever have happened with any woman I was with. Goodbye!

The old fart.

a pubescent boys story, no finesse and ridiculously implausible

Ewwww, fuck no! I'm out!

So well written. Erotic, sensual and sexual.

i like this a lot, so erotic and seductive.

24/02/2020

I am turning 50 in a couple of weeks. After years of giving my mother massages, from when I was 12 until 14 years of age, & then discovering, hoarding & fantasising over pictures of my mother, taken at a nudist beach, I finally made a move on her one night, hoping I would turn her into my own personal cock hungry slut, when I was 24 & she was 43, after coming home drunk from the pub. I crawled into her bed naked, cupped her beautiful 34C breast & kissed her. She freaked out, jumped out of bed & left the room. Drunk as I was, I fell asleep. I never got another chance. But the fantasy of fucking my once beautiful & sexy mother has never left me, although now that she is 69, I don't find her as sexy as I once did

About 2 years ago I discovered Literotica. & I found the amazing Mother/Son Incest genre. Today I discovered your story Moms at the Beach. Was right into the 1st few chapters until the story changed its perspective. So I clicked on your name & found this story. Except for the golden shower scene, I am loving this story & give it 5 ropes of cum

Lover calling she was a slut. and bulshitting is he is ok with that LOL Story

This guy is a fucking joke, he hasn't lived one fucking day on his own without daddies money and he thinks he's better then his dad. Just because he got to fuck his mommy, he thinks he's the alpha, HA, HA! WHAT A JOKE...

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

Was good until the pissing. Sorry, not for me (should have been forewarned).

The son is more observant, mentally astute, and mature than his age belies. Through objective evidence, pictures, yearbook, and general family interaction, he realizes his mother's needs and wants. They both realize what she was, what she is now and what she could be. He is willing to help her regain her poise, confidence, mental and physical wellbeing. After 18 years her husband has quit, both on himself and her. He has lost his drive. He accepts mediocrity. He deserves what he gets, if anything.

He should have ran fast away from the std factory of Patricia.

What's with urinating on someone. That is just gross. One star!

Next time you got a story and you have a character urinating on someone please put a warning on the beginning chapter. That is way off the charts. It's just plain gross.

Wasn’t a bad story until you ruined it with YOUR pissing fantasy plus the only ALPHA I can see here so far is his mum. Disappointing really. ⭐️