All Comments on 'Becoming Veronica Ch. 04'

what happened to all the comments?

ok, maybe u should stick to ur own gender then write for women cause you obviously don't know what a women is like and how she thinks. Victoria is a class A slut that should be working the street corners than working as a waitress. Yeah a women wants to please her man but not act like a bitch in heat in the process. U need more indfo before u write about women again.

One cannot ask for finer romance story writing that what this author has given us here in Chapter 4. An excellent plot enhanced by great romantic feeling gives the reader an engaging and moving story that never bogs down for a moment. Absolutely outstanding storytelling.