by teasing_temptress
That was just incredible. So descriptive..both romantic and erotic. Built up to a great...
some of the language, depending on the partner cursing usually closes the romantic feeling off. Otherwise this was a wonderful story, and one that went straight to my "for study" folder. I pick up good tips where ever I can!
best story ive ever heard, i was on fire the entire time reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Exellent writing, great build-up
It's her birthday, soon, and mine is the following month... it was nice to see that it could be hot AND playful at the same time, as it should be with people who care about each other.