All Comments on 'Bed Talks Ch. 03'

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ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
That was pretty good.

Short - but enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

great story keep going on

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 11 years ago
Please,

keep this excellent story going!!!!!!

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Looking better

This is a very compelling story. Some interesting shit happened between and around these two ladies, and it behooves Hubby to know all about it! We've already found out some important and kinky history. Knowing it earlier would probably have allowed Hubby to have a different perspective about Sweetie's BFF!

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 11 years ago
Intrigued

I'm feeling a bit like the guy in this story, definitely aroused but terrified as to where this might be going. When a relationship starts on such an even keel and then rapidly explodes, the result could be disastrous. Of course, the ride is amazing. Very well written.

OOAAOOAAover 11 years ago
Congratulations!!!

Excellent chapter for an excellent story!!!!!!

THANKS!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
5 stars again

Wow!!! Another fantastic story. Cant wait to read more! Love it!

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
Damn

The shrinks need to work overtime on these two coconuts. At least no one cheated.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 11 years ago
Weaving a Web/ Building a Mystery !

Story makes up in intensity what it lacks in length. Author is doing nothing new per se, but deftly juggles cliched aphrodisiacs and enigmatic psychodrama. Excellent ride heading at noir vector and to a unknown destination.

ramonbrookramonbrookabout 11 years ago
All three chapters were GREAT

I'm just not sure what way this heading though! Maybe a chapter 4, could shed some light.

tennesseeredtennesseeredabout 11 years ago
Very fine

Very imaginative and damn hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Dumb guy

Could he be any dumber? He's in the deep end of the swamp and the water is cold, black and bottomless. He's getting played and doesn't seem to realize it. Better wake up!

larchr1larchr1about 11 years ago
Bed talks

Hot, hot, hot! Please continue the series.

WeBothDoWeBothDoabout 11 years ago
Great stuff

We're hoping for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Just extraordinary!

You sir, are a genius. Best erotic writing ever. Well done. Well done!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Could not have put it better than next msg ....so hot and oddly intimate.

Just extraordinary!

You sir, are a genius. Best erotic writing ever. Well done. Well done!!

TornadoTysTornadoTysalmost 10 years ago
Hot Story

A very hot story and interesting characters.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 8 years ago
Second time through...

playing with fire. You will get burned.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I seem to be very late to this party, like nine years too late. This is the type of intelligent, expertly written eroticism I frequently search Literotica for, but rarely ever find. Damn near perfect, if you ask me. I'm already lamenting that gggrena, the author, hasn't posted any thing new in many years, much to my chagrin.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 2 years ago

fun, erotic read. too bad part 4 is a repeat of part 2 as I would have liked to hear about the 3some and new living arrangement

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