by silkstockingslover
Another great story just like the previous 8. Would love to some mother/daughter interaction in the next chapter it sounds like Jenny is ready for it.
BUT with every chapter I read, I like the character of Karen less and less.
Ed
I love seeing the mother humiliated by her daughters Mistress!
thanks for the acknowledgement of the story idea , you have written it perfectly as usual . Cant wait for parts 10 and more , i love this series so much
"Witty" dialogue, three hole slut mentioned in every story, and same sex scenes with different names. Her stories are all variation of a theme. Hundreds of stories all basically the same. If you think she is good writer, try some others. They are far superior and most importantly varied authors in stories and writing style.
I'm happy you have a story that has bdsm and a loving relationship. its not all whips and spanking pain. there is all that in the life style but there is also love and as a submissive my self you should look into how much power a submissive has . a mistress or master is powerful but with out a submissive they have nothing . think of adding more after care in some of your stories also keep up the good work
You are one of my favorite writers on Lit., if I see you've written something new, it immediate goes to the top of my to read list, I love the world you've made nd I love the characters that inhabit it.
This felt like a filler in what has otherwise been a great series. Even the sex scenes were pretty bland by your usual standard Jasmine, and the storyline didn't move on sufficiently. At this point there are plenty more stories that I would rather have a new chapter for or maybe something new altogether.
Another great story Jasmin keep it up can't wait to read more of this story and all your other work
That was a great story I came twice just reading it and it was hot . Are you going to continue this story line ? If so I can't wait to read it ,ilove this series.
Looking forward to more of this story , the building romance of Jenny and Ashley .How things go with the movie star . More with Magen and maybe some with her mother. Oh and their is still the dance for them to go to.
Thank you Jasmine so much for this new chapter. I have just reread the whole story again & enjoyed almost every page, (I think Karen was rather let off the hook & deserved some punishment). I just can't wait for chapter 10 & the continuing adventures of your gorgeous characters. Apart from reading about the adventures that our two young lovers are going to enjoy in LA I look forward to Mistress Megan meeting up with Miss Morgan (I hope that is possible!). xx
I can't wait to read more of this series. I hope we get a nice long story for all the fun they will have on thier adventure to LA
This series has been one of my favorites on the entire site, and I was elated to read the latest chapter. It was excellent, as always. And now I can't wait for Karen's (and Ashley's) next adventure!
There is so much more needed. Mommy being Jenny’s pet and having Ashley join in !!!!!!
This chapter was so hot and wet please continue it Ashley and Jenny are the best couple
I just read the whole series and I loved it! I can't wait to see more - Jenny and Ashley in LA and at the dance and especially Jenny dominating her mom. Lesbian incest should be an interesting addition to the story.
I love your work and I would love to keep reading Jenny's story. I would really like to find out what goes on in LA (lesbian mile-high club) and maybe when they get back after the dance share Jenny's mom.
Just finished this series loved it have reread it since finishing it. Very erotic and tantalizing Cannot Wait for More in this Series Please! I want to see what happens in LA with Jenny and Ashley and the Valentine's dance and so much more. See where things go with Jenny's mom and her journey as a submissive lesbian with her mistresses as well. You do a very good job with the narrative and helping readers with visualising each character and situation. Look forward to more!. Please continue this story!
Your series absolutely amazes me. 9 beautifully crafted chapters covering damn near every aspect of a 2 week whirlwind changing of the guard in a young womans life. Keep up the great work.
You have two great story lines. This one and “What Mom Knows”. The stories (and the FANS) deserve to get more. I have enjoyed many of your stories, but these two I just keep reading again and again. I REALLY hope you give us more of both. I want to read more about what happens to the great characters you have created. By the way, I do enjoy how Megan, Jenny and others keep appearing in other stories. Keep up the great work.
I have read every chapter so intently that it reminds me of my own lesbian transformation. I dearly love this story and hope u right many more chapters. I would also like to see Jenny dominate her mother and Ashley dominate Jenny's mother as well. Thanks for allowing me a few very intens1e orgasms while reading this
One of the clearest and most eloquent ways of stating the difference in dominant relationships!!!!!! I also was greatly able to feel the bond between Jenny and Ashley. Brilliant writing!!!! Looking forward to their story continuing.
Looking forward to hopefully seeing a chapter about both Jenny and Ashley dominating Jenny's mom.
I’ve so enjoyed this and wait for what comes next
No matter what that is I know I’ll enjoy it as I enjoy 99% of your work
Please let the next chapter be soon
Yet again another superior story. You never fail to pease. Looking for to Chapter 10. Their flight to LA, their escapades there, and their flight back (special surprise someone on-board may be). Thank you. Thank you. Thank you
ok now O need to read chapters 10-20.... I mean, you can't just leave us hanging like this........I'm so freaking wet now..... I'll just have to have my girlfriend eat me out.... giggle
Brigitte
I’m a guy and I have read some of your stories before but, WOW, how have I not read this before? This is, without a doubt, the absolute best storyline on Literotica!! I can’t wait to read more.
I am a guy and I have read a lot of stories on literotica and this series is by far some of the best yet. I am like everyone else I want more of this to continue, plane ride there, events in LA ( all of the events and more). Plain ride home, more of mom and Her mistresses and Jenny and Ashley with Jenny mom. Jenny teacher and Mistress Megan. And anything else ur brilliant mind can think of. Thank You for these stories and looking forward to ready a lot more of them.
Whole series is like nothing I have read before. I can't wait to read about the girls in LA
This is such a great, well written story. I've been hanging in utter suspense for the last nine chapters!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
What a good series of stories I would like your consent to translate into Spanish
As with almost every series of stories from you I really hope you continue this. Very well written. Even if there were some continuity issues. Miss Morgan asked Jenny if she ever used a double sided dildo and she said no. Yet in her governor flashback which was well before miss Morgan she gets fucked with one.
Well, I'm a guy and slightly bi, but This was a great story, and I liked it a lot. I followed the story, starting with sexstories.com, following it to literoticaria ,starting eariler today which is 12/28/2021 (I read fast). If there is yet another chapter, I haven't looked for it yet. I'm mod_man from sexstories.com (read my stories, if you can find them.) Search for Shaman 2, and go back from there.
Absolutely amazing. Started hot and got even better. I must look for the sequals.
Silk, you did it again, your kinky beautiful mind kept me wanting the next chapter. Your stories are the best on here.
Oh, no! It can't be over yet. The girls have to spend the week tending to the Hollywood star and come home to double Jenny’s mom and then invite Ashley’s mom over to become their latest pet. Are we just leaving Miss Morgan to suffer from loneliness? And that’s just the obvious. I’m certain Silkstockingslover can invent a lot more. Let the good times roll!
Wow you are a goddess when it comes to writing I was hooked from the start.
oNE of the best stories if not the Best Ive read. Makes me wish I was born a lesbian. Love how Mistress Megan makes a sex slave out of Jenny Karen & Co. Are all girls that easy to convert? Love it. will read more of your stories.
Loved it! Now we need more… much unresolved 😊 thank you for this exquisite story and sharing your beautiful talent of writing
OMFG!!! This story is incredible. How characters are introduced, left for a chapter or more and then reintroduced to even great erotic heights. Then the dynamics between the people, along with the interwoven story lines between the characters. Love how each of the characters (other than Mommy-slut as a complete submissive and Rosie as a complete top) have elements of being both a Mistress and Submissive. The upcoming week sounds like it could be several chapters unto itself ... Karen continuing her training of Mommy-slut, Mistress Megan continued training of Karen, the week in LA for Jenny & Ashley.
It's been several years since this last chapter but do hope you're able to revisit this story again.
What can I add to the previous comments? great storey. Apart from the obvious editing errors and a few spelling mistakes which as you are American are excusable. nice flow and storey rhythm, good character depiction and with the right amount of spice.
My only comment about the storey line , an call me a prude, is the identification of predators, extortion, blackmail and coercion., Slightly uncomfortable with that as it has wider implications in society.
would love to see a continuation of the storey as it was generally very enjoyable. congrats.
Waiting for next chapter. You can’t write this many chapters without continuing the story.
What I want to know is? Why Jenny is without a hymen in her system? She is supposedly a virgin and I haven't seen anything to make her otherwise.
Thank fuck for Megan. Without her, the entire complex relationships would have torn themselves apart.
Instead, we have two beautiful girls in love and some strong Mistress/slut relationships continuing.
HOLY FUCK! 🥵
I've read quite a few of your stories, so far this one was the best, your an excellent writer, your fantasies are also excellent, I haven't found your equal thus far, there are many very talented writers here, yet there may only be 1 or 2 that share the rarefied air you occupy in my estimation... Bravo!
I am still very courius next adventure Jenny and Ashley . Please dont torture Us to King for next chapter 😁
Loved the story. I'm an older guy and i was constantlly picturing myself on my knees lapping up pussy juice. Was kind of depressed when the story ended...
Looking forward to reading Jenny and Ashly's adventures in L. A.