All Comments on 'Bedroom Pet Pt. 02'

Amazing story, great addition to the first one. Please write more especially about Tina because she's in that first stage of control that was my favourite part with Monica!

Intresting and well written story . But for some reason I can't buy into it . I think there maybe to much repitition of all the psychological stuff . Honestly , it started getting boring I don't think you needed to tell us what they were thinking every time .

I would personally hate this story because of how immoral it is, but this is a perfect story to show how horrible it is to be used and abused. Not even the cheating wives stories hold a candle to this. So despite it I favorite this story.

i can not believe what i read the last hours. this story was sooooo fantastc, sooo unimaginably. just fantastic.greeting from germany.

This story and the previous one were just fantastic. So very very sexy. Please keep up the amazing work. The way the main character at times fights the brainwashing before giving in once again is wonderful.

Bit drawn out at times, but love the methodical progression into obscurity while somehow maintaining a sense of plausibility. Also love how much of it reads like a strong shroom trip (pulsating 4D colours, mind compartmentilization etc). I could really get lost in this. Well done and thank you.

some of this is legit the stuff of my nightmares, alien things come out of person's mouths into other person's mouths...when i was younger i caught an ep of sliders with something like that & it has stayed with me for life. But things that turn me off can also turn me on when written like this, i have found! So, good job!?!

i came buckets to this, thank you